Authors note: My dog have a new home with a bunch of strangers that love me. I do love the stranger that feeds me.
One day I was playing with my other brothers and having a great time when my owner came in and 2 other strangers. The strangers walked around looking at my brothers but I wanted to play some more so I did. I ran around thinking they wont notice me but I was wrong. There was one stranger that piked me up and looked at me. So I decided to lick the stranger to see if the stranger would put me back down and I was write. The two strangers started talking to my owner and one of the strangers pointed to me . Then my owner piked me up and I thought I was in trouble. My owner gave me to the strangers and they carried me out and that was the last time I ever so my owner.
The strangers took me to these big scary thing called a car. The stranger opened these piece of metal called a door. There was a chair in side. They walked in and sat down own the chair. I was with one of the strangers. Then something loud happened and I was scared. But eventually I fell asleep. Then I woke up when the big scary thing stooped The stranger opened the piece of metal. The strangers started walking to this big house.
When I got in to the house they put this red itchy stuff around my neck. They carried me over to this tree and made my stand underneath it until smaller stranger came home.
If this is in the point of view of your dog, you should state so in your author's note. Your author's note should tell that it's in the point of view of your dog. You should also come up with a better, more original name for this piece.
ReplyDeleteyes I agree, and who is the stranger?
Deleteyou spelled the word "stooped" wrong.It's stopped not stooped.
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