Authors note: My first car will be a mustang.
My favorite car is a mustang because I like how fast they go. The engine is loud and awesome. I like the color red on a mustang. They are like jets flying by and you can here the scream of the engine.
Like I said in my comment for the basketball one- WHY IS IT ONLY 3 SENTENCES LONG? You should fix it. It's alright, because now you should know... just don't do it anymore. You most likely won't get a good grade if you only have 4 sentences on the whole post.
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