Author's Note: I love horror movies and action they were probably the first movies I ever watched
My favorite TV channel is Syfi because of its cool shows and movies. It has scary movies, weird movies and gory movies. Its TV shows are scary, weird and funny. My favorites are the movies, including horror and action.
You need a better author's note. (An author's note is supposed to be something to make the reader want to read your piece. Also, it should give away some part of your piece.) I noticed that most of your other pieces don't even have author's notes. Please title you blog something other than "Language Arts". It is hard to tell whose blog I am reading, then. Just title it something like "Jared's Language Arts".
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